给你支招-如何用英文写作
逍遥学能 2018-04-18 14:40
文体介绍
如何用英文写清单诗(list poems)是本单元的写作辅导内容。清单诗是一种很简单的诗歌,其主题很随意,通常是列举一系列事物。这类诗的行数没有具体的限制,每行的词数也可能不尽相同,作者可以按照自己的喜好来决定诗歌的长短。它可以压韵也可以不压韵,但是不等于记流水账,它要求具有一定的逻辑性、可读性和趣味性,并且要注意语言的简洁和语意的条理与连贯。
任务聚焦
请以“If I had studied harder”为题创作一首“清单诗”,联想要合情合理。
激活大脑
1. 确定一个主题。确定了“If I had studied harder”作为题目后,我们就要展开合情合理的想象,如“就会多得几分,就会考试及格,就会使老师高兴”等。
2. 理清写作思路。※先条件后结果。第一句是虚拟条件句“If I had studied harder”,紧接着我们就要按照这个思路写出其对应的表示虚拟结果的主句,即要用到“I would have ...(与过去事实不相符合)”的句型。特别要注意的是,表结果的内容要慢慢过渡,且相互之间有一定的逻辑关系。
※先结果后条件。还有另外一种结构,即:先把结果说出来,再一一列举各种合理的条件。如:
I would have passed the maths exam,
if I hadn’t had the point got lost,
if I’d had just one more minute,
if I had studied harder,
if I had accepted the suggestions of Joe,
if I had asked my teachers for help when not
understanding,
if I hadn’t stayed up so late the night before,
if I hadn’t taken it for granted
if ...
3. 运用适当时态。不论是以上的哪种结构,都不能把时态弄错。与过去事实不相符合,从句用过去完成时,主句用would / could / should / might have done;与现在事实不相符合,从句用一般过去时(be通常用were),主句用would / could / should / might do;与将来事实不相符合,从句用should do或者were to do或者一般过去时,主句用would / could / should / might do。
范文参考
If I had studied harder
If I had studied harder,
I would have got more scores,
I would have passed the maths test,
I would have pleased my teacher,
I would have made my parents and younger sister
proud of me,
I would have become one of the most happy
people in the world.
通过以上的指导,你是不是已经对“清单诗”有了一定的了解呢?那就动手试一试吧!学会做生活的有心人,把生活当中的点滴变成一首首简单的英语“清单诗”,既是学习,又是娱乐,寓“学”于乐,一举两得!赶快行动吧!
版权声明:本文内容由互联网用户自发贡献,该文观点仅代表作者本人。本站仅提供信息存储空间服务,不拥有所有权,不承担相关法律责任。如发现本站有涉嫌抄袭侵权/违法违规的内容,请发送邮件至 lxy@jiyifa.cn 举报,一经查实,本站将立刻删除。